这是IBT成绩单上ETS给予低分作文的评语.docVIP

这是IBT成绩单上ETS给予低分作文的评语（以独立写作中得3分为例）： (1) Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications, and /or details. (2)Displays unity, progression, and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured. (3)May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning. (4)May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary.  我们可以清楚的看到，低分作文的几个要素：作文主题表达不够明确而是有些含糊；每个段落切换叙述的起承转合掌握度差；句式结构和词汇运用造成阅读者不能清晰的理解其所表达的意思；虽然词汇和句式使用正确，但是对于掌握使用长难复合句和词汇多样化的能力极度