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1）漏写标题；标题范围过大 2）内容 ●第二段未能用适当的词来写尊敬的理由 ● 第三段与第二段之间的过渡不自然 ●第三段所举例子不够具体，或不能说明理由 ●结论段离题。 本次任务型写作第二部分主要问题： 构建写作模式： 举例说明你尊敬他的理由 There are many examples to prove my reasons why I respect Jobs Steven. For example,…… I really respect Steven Hawking for his perseverance. For example, ….. Here is a good example of his kindness and unselfishness 主题句 + 例子 难点突破： 举例说明节约用水的方法。 There are many ways to save water. For example,… 举例说明你面对压力时如何自我调节。 When faced with pressure, I often try my best to adjust myself and reduce it to the minimum. Here is an example. Possible versions: The students above respect Marie Curie most, for she is very ambitious and diligent. Moreover, she was the first woman to win Nobel Prize twice, and her discovery contributed a lot to the medical world. There is no denying that Marie Curie was a great woman, while the one I respect most is Jobs Steven. I show my respect to him because he was creative, ambitious and tough. What’s more, he had a great passion for his career. Here is an example for his toughness and his passion for his career. He was once fired by the company Apple, but he was so tough that he didn’t lose heart. Instead, he devoted himself to a new field and achieved a lot, which gave him the power to save Apple in its hardest time. He said, “ I was born to change the world.” And he made it because of his creation of I-phone 4, which made a hit worldwide. I admire his tough character, creative power and strong mind, for which I will respect him forever. The person I respect When it comes to who is the person I admire most, I would say the person is Lei Feng. As we all know, Lei Feng was a great and selfless person. He was ready to help others at any time, who was the moral model of the Chinese. It is Lei Feng who leads us to build a harmonious society where everyone learns to respect the old and protect the children. It is of help for us to practice the idea of his. Lei Feng’s