【志鸿全优设计】高中英语-Module4ASocialSurveyMyNeighbourhoodSectionⅣ目标导学-外研版必修1.docVIP

Module 4　A Social Survey—My Neighbourhood Section Ⅳ　Writing 写作指导 Ⅰ.佳作展示与背诵 最近你和你班同学对大众社区进行了调查，请你根据表格内容写一份题为“A report on Dazhong Community”的英文调查报告。 名称 大众社区 位置 市北郊 人口数量 1,620户，约5,000人 职业 约有专业人才（如老师、医生等）859人，工人2,040人，学生1,100人，退休工人约1,000人 构成 居住区 （the resident area） 30幢公寓大楼[ 便民区 （the service area） 2个超市，3个诊所（clinic）,5个饭店，10几个小商店 休闲区 （the recreation area） 1个公共图书馆，1个公园，提供健身器材（healthcare facilities） 特色 邻里友好，相互帮助 不足 有些居民环保意识不强，随手丢垃圾 建议 …… 注意：1.词数：100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 One possible version A report on Dazhong Community Recently we have had a survey about Dazhong Community located in the northern suburb.The result is as follows： In this community，the resident area is made up of 30 apartment buildings with about 5,000 residents in 1,620 households.Among them there are 859 professional people，including teachers，doctors，etc.,2,040 workers,1,100 students and about 1,000 retired workers.There are 2 supermarkets，3 clinics,5 small restaurants，and more than 10 shops in the service area.The recreation area includes a public library and a beautiful park with excellent healthcare facilities.What impresses us most is that the residents living here are all friendly and helpful. The only thing people complain about is that some residents have no environment protection awareness and drop rubbish carelessly.To solve it，I think some students can volunteer to pick up rubbish and be models to others. Ⅱ.思路点拨 1．本文的体裁属于调查报告，时态主要使用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称以第三人称为主。 2．文章可分为三段，第一段点明调查的对象——大众社区；第二段介绍社区状况；第三段介绍社区存在的问题和建议。 3．常用词汇 （1）描写地理位置：be located in，in the northern suburb，lie in the south of ...，cover an area of ...square kilometres，be surrounded by ... （2）描写社区状况：there be ...，including ...，be divided into ...，be made up of，be shaped like ...，take on a new look，the total population is ...，the number of adults in employment is，healthcare facility ... （3）描写社区建筑物：apartment building，public library，park，clinic ... （4）描写问题和建议：complain，become more and more serious，influencing ...，taking everything into con