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(2013新课标全国Ⅰ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes away.She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall,with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have never known. 答案:I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to me on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she away.She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very .He was tall,with broad and a beard that turned from black gray over the years.He had a deep voice,which set apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.In a fact,he even scared my classmates away they came over to play or do homework with me.However,he was the gentlest man I have known. 剖析:1.used to do sth.表示“过去常常做某事”。 2.此处描述过去的事情,因此应用一般过去时,与主句时态一致。 3.remember sth./sb.very well/clearly“很清楚地记得某事/某人”。 4.人有两个肩膀,因此应用复数形式。 5.turn from A to/into B表示“由A变成B”。 6.他的嗓音低沉,这使他与众不同。短语set sb.apart from“使某人与众不同”。 7.分析句子成分可知,逗号前后为两个并列的分句,且表示并列顺承关系,因此应用and连接。 8.in fact“事实上”,为固定搭配。 9.during为介词,后可接名词或代词,不能引导从句,故应改为when。when在此处引导时间状语从句。 10.我的爷爷是我曾见过的最温和的一个人。ever“曾经”,符合语境。 Passage 2 (2013新课标全国Ⅱ) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800’s.Have tea in the late afternoon pr