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写作课讲评学案 （A Study Plan for Writing） 姓名_________ 班级_________ 考试类别________ 时间__________ 试题回放 审题 作文类型（体裁） 人称 时态 要点 1. _____________________________________________ 2. _____________________________________________ 3. _____________________________________________ 4. _____________________________________________ 5. _____________________________________________ 用词 组句 成段 成篇 试题评分 自评或他评得分 老师评分 考后小结 我的失误 我所收获的优秀句子及词汇 【参考范文】 Recently, our school has conducted a survey on the present education in our city. The results are as follows. As can be seen from Chart 1, high school students are from different family backgrounds. Enjoying our city’s excellent education are mainly local students who make up 91 %. What’s more, with the city’s economy and education improving rapidly, 1% foreign students and 8% of the students, whose parents are nonlocal workers, are also attracted to study here. Judging from Chart 2, we can see senior-high graduates have more choices. Nowadays, 60% of the students intend to go to university, while 30% prefer to attend vocational schools. Believe it or not, the rest 10% are determined to go abroad for further study, which we never dreamed of in the past. All in all, our city has witnessed great changes in its education. But, personally, there still remains a lot for our city government to do, such as providing nonlocal students equal access to our city education, and creating more ways for the senior-high graduates to promote themselves and make their dreams come true. 【图表作文模板】 结构 内容 表述 Part 1：Introduction 提出 现象 或论点 Recently, we have done a survey to find out…/we had a heated discussion on… Part2： Body (1) 描述 图例 内容 1．As the chart shows／As can be seen from the chart，great changes have been taking place in…(在……方面)．In 2000，there were...(多少人做……)．By the year 2006，the number of... (做某事)has reached up to(达到多少)． 2.The average number has increased by 20％in the past 5 years． 3．The number of people who... has dropped／i