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语篇分析 英语11-4 班 吕云丹 贾思齐 杜仕玲 If I become an athlete ,will I be happy? For many young people, becoming a professional athlete might seem like a dream job. If you become a professional athlete ,you will be able to make a living doing something you love. Many athletes give money to schools and charities ,and do a lot of work to help people. This is a great chance that many people do not have. However, professional athletes can also have many problems .If you are famous ,people will watch you all the time .And they will follow you everywhere .This can make life difficult. If you play sports for a living ,your job will sometimes be very dangerous . In fact ,many famous people complain that they are not happy. They say they were happier before they become rich and famous. 语篇模式：议论文 由题目If I become an athlete ,will I be happy？引出正反两个观点（主张与反主张） 结构（提问与回答模式） 动词时态与语法结构 通篇使用 将来时为主，与篇尾一般现在时形成对比，来表达支持与不支持的观点。 语法结构：if条件句 主将从现的语法句型 eg.If you become a professional athlete ,you will be able to make a living doing something you love. 语法衔接手段 A.使用照应中的内照应，内照应中的前照应使语篇更加连贯 eg. If you are famous ,people will watch you all the time and follow you everywhere .This can make life difficult. B.使用内照应中的人称照应 eg.Many famous people complain that they are not happy. C.比较照应：如happy and happier 形成照应关系 D.省略 ：避免重复，衔接上下文，使表达简洁清晰。 如：This is a great chance that many people do not have.（the chance ) 词汇衔接手段 复现关系中的原词复现 如：professional 多次出现，共4 次；famous 同文出现4次 使句子相互衔接紧凑。 同义词复现 如：make a living 和for a living ; professional athletes 和 play sports 逻辑联系语 逻辑联系语中如 If you are famous ,people will watch you all the time .And they will follow you everywhere . 其中and 作为增补逻辑联系语，使语篇中句子联系更紧密。 转折：如 However, professional athletes can also have many problems .用however 表转折使语篇表达连贯 Thank you