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选译重要信息 The translation of an introduction of enterprises must keep the core information of the original but delete some unimportant information. 划线的部分都是拖沓的 原文：台州大丰机电有限公司是…公司董事长兼总经理夏建国秉承“厚人薄已、守诚取信、产业报国”的理念，先后荣获 “浙江省优秀职业经理人”、“中国百佳职业经理人”、“浙江省经营管理大师”， “温岭市民营企业家协会副会长”、“台州市经营管理常务理事”等称号，他领导的大丰人以“坦诚、勤奋、求精、向上”的企业精神，将大丰凝聚成一个具有相当规模的现代化企业。 划线的部分都是拖沓的 在人力资源建设上，启用了众多的高级经理人，并在内部实施人才阶梯培养，管理干部培育等措施；在企业文化建设上，利用文化长廊充实员工的生活，主办形式多样的活动给员工提供展示才能的舞台，创办《大丰报》弘扬大丰精神。良好的文化氛围使得员工积极努力工作，不断开拓进取，为大丰这棵常青之树添枝加叶。 评论 Western customers are definitely not familiar with the titles for president Xia Guojian. There is no need mentioning all the titles “ ‘江省优秀职业经理人’、 ‘中国百佳职业经理人’、 ‘浙江省经营管理大师’， ‘温岭市民营企业家协会副会长’、 ‘台州市经营管理常务理事’ ”. Similarly, the rest of this paragraph mainly concerns corporate guideline, culture and cultivating system. Some of words will make no sense if translated into English, such as “良好的文化氛围使得员工积极努力工作，不断开拓进取，为大丰这棵常青之树添枝加叶”. Therefore, it is better to change the translation to be more concise as follows: 改译 Under the leadership of our president Xia Jianguo who has been awarded as “One of the Best 100 Professional Managers in China”, Dafeng has developed itself into a large-scale modernized corporation. Advanced training and promotion systems are used to cultivate new skilled workers and talented managers. About the corporate culture, we have created our own newspaper “Dafeng Paper” to encourage our working spirit and activate the working atmosphere. * * *