《7b-清华科技英语写作课件》.pdf

Scientific Writing and Presentation in English Lecture 7b: Proof-reading (checking) your text (plus i.e./etc./respectively) A. Godfrey Tsinghua University, Spring 2007 (exercise on linking ideas) From Eqn. (6) it can be seen that the transition temperature should vary linearly with the inverse of the grain size. 1…, a plot of Tt against 1/d should be a straight line. Results for both samples are shown in Fig. 1. For pure iron the data fall neatly on a straight line. 2 …, the slope agrees well with the predicted value. 3 …, the data for the steel samples show a wide scatter. 4 …, the values are still in the range expected from Eqn. 6. 5 … the fact that the model does not include the effects of solute atoms, a reasonable fit is 6 … observed for both samples. 7 …, a simple model incorporating only the grain size and temperature can be used to predict the transition temperature for pure, or nearly pure, metals. Scientific Writing: Lecture 7 #4 (exercise on linking ideas) From Eqn. (6) it can be seen that the transition temperature should vary linearly with the inverse of the grain size. Therefore, a plot of T against 1/d should be a straight line. Results for both t samples are shown in Fig. 1. For pure iron the data fall neatly on a straight line. Moreover, the slope agrees well with the predicted value. However, the data for the steel samples show a wide scatter. Nevertheless, the values are still in the range expected from Eqn. 6. Despite the fact that the model does not include the effects of solute atoms, a reasonable fit is thus observed for both samples. Consequently, a simple model incorporating only the grain size and temperature can be used to predict the transition temperature for pure, or nearly pure, metal