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GREArgument 72 GREArgument 72 新GGRREEAArrgguummeenntt 7722 [Thefollowingappearedasalettertotheeditorofanationalnewspaper.]”Yourrecent articleoncorporatedownsizing*inElthyriamaintainsthatthemajorityofcompetent workerswhohavelostjobsasaresultofdownsizingfaceseriouseconomichardship,often foryears,beforefindingothersuitableemployment.Butthisclaimisunderminedbya recentreportontheElthyrianeconomy,whichfoundthatsince1999farmorejobshave beencreatedthanhavebeeneliminated,bringingtheunemploymentrateinElthyriatoits lowestlevelindecades.Moreover,two-thirdsofthesenewlycreatedjobshavebeenin industriesthattendtopayabove-averagewages,andthevastmajorityofthesejobsare full-time.(*Downsizingistheprocesswherebycorporationsdeliberatelymakethemselves smaller,reducingthenumberoftheiremployees.)[SpecificTask Instruction:Writea responseinwhichyoudiscusswhatspecificevidenceisneededtoevaluatetheargument andexplainhowtheevidencewouldweakenorstrengthentheargument.] 题目翻译 题目翻译 题题目目翻翻译译 以下文字出自一封写给全国性报纸的编辑的信：“你们最近关于 Elthyria 公司裁员的文章认为大多数有才 能的人因公司裁员而失业，而在通常好几年才找到其他合适的工作前，他们会面临经济困难。但这种说法 被最近一次关于 Elthyria 经济的报告所推翻，报告表明自1999年以来新增就业机会远多于裁员岗位，使 得Elthyria近几十年的失业率降到了最低，而且新增就业岗位中有三分之二的薪酬高于行业中的平均工资， 而且绝大多数这类工作是全职工作。[注]裁员是公司故意减少它们雇员数量的方法。”[说明：写一篇文章， 阐述需要哪些具体的证据来评价这个论证过程，并解释这些证据如何削弱或强化这个论证过程。] 题目分析 A. 是推出结论的一个判断，正确找出原文中的前提(可能是隐性的)后才能有效地找出攻击起点，请简要写 出前提 a recent report on the Elthyrian economy found that since 1999 far more jobs have been created than have been eliminated, bringing the unemployment rate in Elthyria to its lowest level in decades [译]最近一次关于 Elthyria 经济的报告表明自1999年以来新增就业机会远多于裁员岗位，使得 Elthyria 近几十年的失业率降到了最低 two-thirds of these newly created jobs have been in industries that tend to pay above-average wages, and the vast majority of these jobs are full-time [译]新增就业岗位中有三分之二的薪酬高于行业中的平均工资，而且绝大多数这类工作是全职工作 B. 是原题作者根据前提最后得出的判断，也就是我们需要攻击的核心部分，请在简要写出原作者的结论 this claim is undermined by a recent report on the Elthyrian economy [译]这种