bsh《巷》翻译点评和学习资料.pptVIP

Revision: Whoever loiters around in the lane for a while, he will enjoy a mood as calm as the age-old well in the end of the lane. 点评：逐句分析翻译很好，选词符合原文风格，但在行文中还应注意英语的语篇句际间的衔接。如上句开头的there可与其前面的lane产生衔接, 改用where： Whoever loiters around in the lane for a while, he will enjoy a mood as calm as the age-old well in the end of the lane，where you will experience a kind of peaceful quietude rather than eeriness and bleakness. 再次修订：Whoever loiters around in the lane for a while, he will enjoy a mood as calm as the age-old well in the end of the lane，where a kind of peaceful quietude rather than eeri