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HOMEWORK 剑桥真题6 P164-some/others 剑桥真题5 P165-adva/disadvan 剑桥真题7 P173-agree/disagree 剑桥真题5 P173-cause/solution 找出考官范文使用的论证方法及句型 INTRODUCTION 首段 As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.---背景介绍/转述题目,但未发表观点. BODY 1 正文第一段 Many people find their rewards unfair 正文第一段分论点 , especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilities of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue. BODY 2正文第二段 Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that 正文第二段分论点 the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings. CONCLUSION 结尾段 Personally, I think that 发表观点---中立观点 the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievement. 251 Fees discount helps students study abroad Fees discount helps students study abroad Those who spend two or more terms at an overseas university will pay no more than 15% of the years fees at their UK institution, which is good news f