写作 Chapter Four.ppt

Points to Keep in Mind Faulty parallelism occurs when elements that are similar in idea are not made similar in structure. Here are some typical examples of faulty parallelism. Study how the structures are made parallel in the revisions. Activity Achieving Paragraph Coherence Faulty: Knowing how to study and to learn to budget time are important for college students. Revised: Knowing how to study and learning how to budget time are important for college students. Faulty: The doctor recommended plenty of food, sleep, and exercising. Revised: The doctor recommended plenty of