国内部四级写作石雷鹏分析报告.ppt

Mini-test 首先，我祝愿大家更快乐，更健康。 Above of all I congrataulate all the students to happier than before, body is healtier. First, I wish all students are happier and healthier. 课程目标 从“蔡少芬” 到 “贝多芬” 70分 90分 480分 530分 试卷结构分析 Listening 35% Reading 35% Writing 15% Translation 15% 2011年12月四级四级真题 Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. , Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 汉语提纲： (1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及 (2)和汽车的比较 (3)自行车在中国的前途 2006-12 题目：On Spring Festival Gala 1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春晚 2.但是有人提出应取消春晚 3.我的看法 popular-- popularity 首句升级： In China, bicycles have gained great / wide popularity among the public. 高分句式1：双重否定 结构：No ___ is/are more ____ than ___. 升级： In China, no means of transport is more popular and common than bicycles. 方便： convenient/ convenience / inconvenience 对…有益 be good/ beneficial/ rewarding for In my opinion ? I am convinced that … ? To my understanding, Very ? rather / particularly/ exceedingly Think –deem An important ? a significant c.你的职业梦想是什么？ d.如果让你发明一样机器，你会选择什么？ e.如果你有一笔钱，你会用它来做什么？ Adequate 以四级考试为例 1. 英语很重要 2. 学习英语中的困难 3. 如何学好英语 请记住：内容上 熟悉什么就写什么 语言精彩 句子结构词多变： a.遣词 b.造句 遣词两方面： The speech by Obama If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive