高三英语Stories课件.pptVIP

Unit 16Stories 开 篇 背 诵 叙事 [典型例题] (西安八校联考)假设你是李华，在美国探亲，你目击了一起交通事故，警察让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。 注意：根据下列内容要点写出报告 1．时间：715 am，Feb.8, 2009； 2．地点：公园路公园门前； 3．车从第3街向右拐，驶入公园路时撞了一位老人； 4．车未停，沿公园路向西开走； 5．黄色车，车号：AC864，女司机。 说明：1.内容要点要用不同的方式表达。 2．对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 3．词数在100左右；结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua [写作提示] 1．叙事作文属于记叙文，要交待清楚时间、地点、人物等要素。 2．这种文体的写作一般以第一人称或第三人称。 3．时态通常用一般过去时。 [佳作欣赏] It was 715 on the morning of February 8,2009. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the old man while he was crossing the street. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop and drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. [名师点评] 1．本文前两句准确交待了事件发生的时间、地点以及人物。文中对细节描述详细合理。文章语句连接紧密，通顺流畅。 2．句式的运用：多处运用and连接的并列复合句；while引导的时间状语从句，特别是walking...when...”句中when作并列连词用更是文章的亮点。 3．本文美中不足是结尾有些仓促。 记记短语 1.Suddenly, the spaceship slowed down and immediately the system ________________________(出现)—a bright star with twenty or more planets. 2．I remember the dog jumping up on me and ____________________(把我撞倒)into the river. 3．____________________(很久以前)，there lived a beautiful princess. 4．Pliny described a cloud coming down the mountain, ____________________(遮住太阳)and burying everything in its path. 5．________________________(从某种程度上说)Pompeii is like a “time capsule”． 6．Another man, ________________________(侧身躺着), looks as if he is trying to get up. 7．This student ________________________________(以紫色的花命名)． 8．I________________________________________(偶然听到一个关于名字的有趣的故事)when I visited