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写作文 ---宁停三分 不抢一秒 2010年广州二模作文分析 基础写作 体裁： 话题： 基础写作 体裁：应用文 话题：网上购物（生活类） I bought a pair of shoes,…… I am sorry to tell you that…… I ‘m writing to tell you that…… I was quite angry that…… My name is Li Hua, I bought a shones in the XXX shopping website. I must be sorry to say that… The purpose that I wrote to you…. Dear Sir, I wonder if mail a new one, who will pay the fee? If I have to sent the wrong shoes back, who would pay for the money? By the way, who would take the fee if you post the shoes again? I want to ask if I send back the shoes to your company, who pay the money? 询问：若寄回，谁承担寄费？ Dear sir, I’m writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased from your website. What I ordered was a pair of black size nine shoes but I received a pair of white size 8.5 shoes instead. Worse still, there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes, which should have been received on April 10. For the above reasons, I demand either a new pair of black size nine shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund. Also, if I send back the wrong shoes, will your company pay for the postage? Sports shoes运动鞋 Casual shoes便鞋 Slipper拖鞋 Sandals凉鞋 Boots马靴 Canvas帆布 Pumps高跟鞋  读写任务 体裁：议论文 话题：团队精神（寓言） 读写任务 寓言的总结如何写？ （应参照记叙文总结要点） Who: What: Implied Meaning: 读写任务 Who: the hare and tortoise What: 4 times competitions Implied Meaning: cooperation greater success The passage describes four races between the hare and the tortoise and analyses the moral learned from each race. In the last race, they learned they could achieve greater success and satisfaction through co-operation. I think the story can teach us that when we work together, we can achieve more than when we compete. It is a win-win effect. The story reminds me of my experience when I first came to this school. summary My classmate, Michael showed great talent in science studies while I was pretty good at history and economics. I feared that Michael would outperform m