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How to cook a dish China housewives often make buns themselves for their breakfast. To make such buns, however, is quite complicated task. Here is the recipe for such buns to be make. Several things, like flour, pork, sesame oil, soy sauce, onion, ginger, salt ,need to be prepared before the whole process starts. First, sift the flour into the pot, yeast powder or baking powder mixed with water (water not too much ice, not too hot), stir, so be quicker and out of the surface baking. Then add the salt, soy sauce, sugar, and pork are mixed together with the water. After this, sesame oil, onion, ginger can be added to this mixture. Now all the ingredients can be combined into a large bowl, and you can cut the surface into a dough and to roll it, put the filling in the surface. When all this is done, little buns will be steaming, and put the middle to leave a gap, because the buns cooked will be bigger. Finally, steam the pot for half an hour almost (depending on what the fire). 评语： 文中的连接词和过渡词合理，使得全文结构紧凑，但文章行文稍欠流畅；能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，此外文中一些从句的使用，为文章锦上添花，希望继续努力，再创佳绩；文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累，此外作者在单词拼写方面做得很棒；建议本文在结构上增加一个引言段和结尾段显示全部 1.1 How to cook a dish China housewives often make buns themselves for their breakfast. [教师点评] [搭配统计] 动名搭配 cook...dish 在语料库中出现过 166 次 dish 前面的动词分布 , cook 后面的名词分布make...dish,prepare...dish,fix...dish,ready...dish 好评报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: dish, plate 都可表示“盘子”之意。 dish: 是盘子的总称。plate: 指供个人分菜食用的盘子。 好评报错 1.2 To make such buns, however, is quite complicated task. [教师点评] [句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！ 好评报错 [搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...bun 在语料库中出现过 6 次 bun 前面的动词分布 , make 后面的名词分布make...roll 好评报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: complex, complicated, sophisticated, intricate 均含“复杂的”之意。 complex: 侧重内在关系的复杂，需通过仔细研究与了解才能掌握和运用。complicated: 与complex的含义接近，但语气更强，着重极其复杂，很难分析、分辨或解释。sophisticated: 侧重指事物发展到或达到高级的程度所体现出的复杂。intricate: 着重指错综复杂，令人迷惑理解。 好评报错 1.3 Here is the recipe for such buns to be make. [教师点评] [动词错误] 建议把 be make 改成 be made/be making (Auxiliary Verb Agreement) 好评报错 1.4 Several thing