高三英语段写作方略复习课件3.pptVIP

* * 佳作赏析图画作文——图片类 (2010·上海高考) 下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括： ·描述图片里学生上课的场景 ·比较你同时期的上课情况 ·简单谈谈你的感受 上一页 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 1．话题特点：这是一篇图画类作文中的图片作文，也属于话题类作文，材料直观、形象、生动，学生写作时具有很大的自由发挥空间。这就要求学生对图片内容要有充分的认识，认真观察图片，了解图片所表达的内容或内涵，甚至要考虑图片表达的是何时、何地、什么人、什么事、过程和结果等。 上一页 2．写好这类作文要注意： (1)看懂图片内容——活跃的课堂一角，天真活泼的孩子们的表现。 (2)人称和时态：人称用第一、三人称。对图片的描述用一般过去时；谈自己的感受用一般将来时。 (3)连词、过渡段，在文章中起着“润滑”作用，串点成文、整体划一；关键词也必不可少。 上一页 3．常用的句法表达： (1)描述图片内容可用： As we all can see，... The picture shows us that... From the picture, it can be easily seen that... (2) 回顾童年和作对比的时候可用： It reminds me of ...when... Compared with these childrens active attitude, I think back to my time when... When it comes to the topic of this picture, I look back on... 上一页 (3)谈自己的感受时可用： As time goes by..., I realized that... I am shocked to find the difference between... The difference between...gives me some experience... 上一页 As we all can see, the lovely students in the picture are so active that they all put their hands high, hoping to express their own opinions. It is obvious that the atmosphere is relaxing and everyone enjoys it. Thats great, isnt it? The picture also reminds me of the time when I was a fresh student who was too shy to speak in public. Just like me, during my class, our classmates just listened to class, and everyone was afraid of asking questions! I even prayed that my name would come to my teachers mind. But as time goes by, I grow up, so does my mind. I realized hat the situation shown in the picture was fa