CET-4-Wring Lecture.ppt

审题 完成作文的第一步不是马上动笔，而是应该在动笔之前先花1－2分钟来审题，理清大概思路，这能够保证文章扣题和结构的条理性。大家只要扣紧题目来写，就不会出现大的问题。抓住题目的精髓是最理想的，但是如果没有理解题目的核心，就按照确定下来的主题根据提纲来写也未必会失分。 It Pays to Be Honest How I Finance My College Education Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary What Electives to Choose 审题既包括看英文的题目，还包括看中文提纲(有时还有图画和表格等) 怎样提高作文的得分 结构 文章结构的清晰十分重要，这是英文写作的一个基本观点。英语思维和汉语不同，习惯开门见山，而不是水到渠成。 如一篇文章细节很多，考生应按人的认知规律来安排细节。如果违背了这个规律，内容再丰富的文章读起来也会令人费解，甚至给人以支离破碎的感觉。人们叙事习惯之一就是按照事物的重要性来安排次序。 有一篇文章如果每个句子都是七、八个词，或是二、三十词，就会显得单调，难以阅读。相反，一组句子的词数7-23-14-40-6-20，一长一短，一张一弛，文章的抑扬顿挫节奏厉感就出来了。 The young pilot was on his first overseas training. He felt very uneasy. (a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (c) The young pilots first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. (d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. (e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy. (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (j) When the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (l) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy. 语言 尽量避免不应该出现的错误：只有评卷人认可了你语法掌握的水平，他才会抱着宽容甚至欣赏的态度看你的句型设计，用词和例证的援引。 清楚地表达自己的意思：你的文章你自己明白是不够的，要让别人，甚至是以英语为母语的，不懂汉语的人明白才算是真正的合格。 吸引阅卷人目光的“闪光点” 流畅的句子，地道的表达法是闪光点，明言警句，典故，好的例子 尽量避免笔误，不会表达的地方不要生造，否则很可能弄巧成拙，反而得不偿失 注意事项 (1) 适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实。 比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to… 而用Attention should be paid to… 句子开头不要总是用we / I 注意事项 (2) 善于使用插入语， 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说Other individuals, however