浙江省金华市2015年中考英语 写作课复习课件.pptVIP

* PK Which team will be the final winners? Fight for your team! How will you relax yourself after the entrance exams to high school? I think I will relax myself by … … Talk in groups. Make a one-day plan for me. Find somewhere nice in your hometown for Miss Wan to travel. Where can I go? How can I get there? What can I do there? What should I bring? How will I feel? 120s 0s Is this a good writing? One possible version: I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy. I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy. Common ways to give advice: What\How about doing sth.? Try to do sth… Why not\ Why don’t you do sth.? You’d better do sth. It’s a good idea\way\choice to do… Do you have any better ways? Advanced ways to give advice: It couldn’t be better if … Nothing is more interesting than … You are supposed to do sth… 应该 There’s no doubt that you can do sth 毫无疑问 Needless to say不必说 , ……is wonderful. From my point of view, it couldn’t be better if you visit Deshengyan Hill (which is one of the most famous travelling spots in my hometown). Taking a bus is the best way for you (because it’s not only good for the environment but also gives you a chance to know more about our city). There’s no doubt that you should bring your camera. (Thus, you can keep the memory in mind forever.) Needless to say, you will be full of joy whenever you think of the trip. I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy. 改变主语，丰富句型结构 灵活选用词汇或靓句，提升句子层次 使用从句，使句子形式多样化 Travelling is like the oasis绿洲 of our life, saving us from pressure压力. Travelling is like a bunch of flowers, making our life colorful and amazing. Tr