四六级图表作文课程介绍.ppt

2013年12月四级真题作文 题目点评 点评：　　本题漫画探讨手机的广泛使用对人们生活的影响。话题贴近日常生活，难度中等。题目要求简述手机在人们生活中越来越重要的角色，并解释过度使用手机可能带来的后果 手机带来的便利应该是感同身受：比如：获取信息、交流沟通（微信、微博）、娱乐等。 考生主要可以从以下几个角度思考：　　1. 对健康的危害;　　2. 对人际关系的负面影响;　　3. 对个人学习、发展的阻碍。 作文题目解析 作文的第一段（opening paragraph），要进行简单描绘图画内容，这是必须的，也是题目中强制要求的,并点明该图想要传达的寓意（overuse/addict）。 作文的第二段(body part)重点阐述俩个方面：一、手机在人们生活中使用越来越广泛给生活带来很多便利便利（topic sentence ）。然后举例进行支撑，比如：获取信息、交流沟通、娱乐等等；二、过度使用或依赖手机可能带来的危害（topic sentence ）。比如：人际关系、生活习惯、学习等等。 作文的第三段(conclusion)简要概括总结全文（一定是反对这种行为的）。指出手机使用的俩面性，应该引起人们的反思。 Opening paragraph 图片可以用：picture、drawing、cartoon。 图片向我们展示了。。。可以说： As the … presents … As it is portrayed/depicted in the … From the…,we can observe that…/it is frequently observed that… 沉迷于手机的使用，可以说： People are absorbed/bathed/lost in the use of cell phone. People are obsessed/occupied/fascinated with the use of cell phone. People are addicted to… Body part 第二段主题句可以写： Cell phones have been increasingly widespread in peoples life, which are of great benefit to all of us. Exaggerated as the picture is , the phenomenon behind it is rather thought-provoking. It is true/undoubtedly/accepted… that mobile phones have brought great convenience to us as we can send short messages, check e-mails, surf the Internet, or watch videos almost anywhere. However, … Body part 过度依赖手机肯能带来的危害： However, overusing or being addicted to them tends to exert a negative impact on our life. However, the over-dependence on mobile phones will have negative impacts on our life the relationship among people will become indifferent and isolated. overusing cell phones will reduce face-to-face communication among people It seems that most of us enjoy the convenience of contact at the expense of interpersonal relationships. Conclusion 在我看来： Personally, as far as I am concerned, from my perspective, as I see it… 如何概括收尾（一定是抵制过度使用）： I hold that we individuals should make proper use of mobile phone and raise the awareness that good relationship are reinforced by sincere and face-to-face comm