2012届高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图表式作文）练习讲评二.docVIP

随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重。在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬。现请你根据图表所示，就你所在城市空气污染的状况写一篇短文，并对市政府提出至少两条改进建议。 本篇书面表达题目中只有柱形图，在描述图表所反映的内容时，要注意柱形图柱形的高度，并由此判断。 通过审题抓住主要数据反映的主要问题即所要表达的要点： 话题讨论的背景： 1.随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重； 2.在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬； 3.以我们城市为例。 图表1.空气污染50%的原因由车辆引起（路上行驶车辆越来越多，排放有害气体）； 2.空气污染35%的原因由工厂引起（排放废水）； 3.空气污染35%的原因由抽烟引起（对他人身体和环境有害）； 4.空气污染10%的原因由其它因素引起。 向市政府提出改进的建议。 Para 1话题讨论的背景； Para 2概述图表所反映的信息现象产生的原因Para 3向市政府提出改进的建议。 变点为句 注意多重表达 1.随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重； ①With the development of industry, air pollution is getting more and more serious. ②As industry is developing, air pollution is getting more and more serious. 2.在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬。 ①In some cities, more and more people are suffering from different kinds of illness because of air pollution. ②In some cities, more and more people have got miserable diseases because of air pollution. 3.以我们城市为例。 Take our city for example. 图表1.空气污染50%的原因由车辆引起（路上行驶车辆越来越多，排放有害气体）。； ①About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. There are more and more cars and buses on the road, which give off poisonous gases. ②About half of the problem is caused by vehicles. More and more cars and buses are driving on the road, which give off poisonous gases. 2.空气污染35%的原因由工厂引起（排放废水）。 ①35% of air pollution is caused by factories, which often pour waste water into the river. ②35% of air pollution is caused by factories, which often discharge waste water into the river. 3.空气污染35%的原因由抽烟引起（对他人身体和环境有害）。 ①Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm to others’ health as well as to environment. ②Another factor is smoking. Smoking does harm not only to others’ health but also to environment. 4.空气污染10%的原因由其它因素引起。 ①About 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons. ②Other factors, taking up about 10%, cause air pollution. 向市政府提出改进的建议：围绕造成空气污染的其中两条原因进行联想。如：应该采取措施与空气污染作斗争。努力改善公共交通以满足公众的需求。禁止人们在公共场所抽烟； We suggest that the city government should take some measures to fight against pollution. For example, first of all, the government should make a great