2012届高考英语书面表达（文字提纲式作文）练习讲评四（word版）.docVIP

试题来源：2012届江苏省石庄高级中学期中模拟测试 时下，家长给孩子送饭的现象。对此，都有自的看法。请根据下表所提的信息，用英文写一篇短文。 ……（考生自拟，两到三点）。 注意：1对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译2.字数150左右 3.作文中不得提及考生所在和本人姓名 通过审题，确定本文的话题为“对家长给孩子送饭的现象”。围绕这个话题，将题目中叙述的文字转换成以下要点： ①时下，家长给孩子送饭的现象对此，都有自的看法。 ③担心学校的饭菜也许不合孩子的口味； ④满足孩子生活上的需求是他们的责任； 老师的想法 ⑤家长这样做是可以理解的； ⑥可能会带来饮食方面的安全问题； 学生的感想和建议 ⑦父母的关心和爱护表示感谢； ⑧为了减轻家长的负担，对学校食堂和包括你在内的学生提出建议……。 本篇书面表达的文字提纲实际上就是按照表达顺序提供的，所以不存在理顺要点的环节。至于所要增加的要点实际上就是“对学校食堂和包括你在内的学生提出建议”。根据生活实际对学校食堂的建议顺手拈来：提高饭菜的质量和服务态度，为我们学生提供可口，健康的饭菜。对包括你在内的学生的建议也比较容易想到。如：不仅要学习书本知识，还要学会独立生活等等。 1.化解难点 ①时下 nowadays now recently ②可口饭delicious food delicious meals food that tastes good/ delicious ③屡见不鲜 common a common sight a common occurrence (be) often /commonly seen ③学校的饭菜 school food meals served by the school canteen ④不合孩子的口味 not cater to their children’s taste not satisfy their children not meet their children’s needs ⑤满足孩子生活上的需求 satisfy their children’s needs meet their children’s needs of life ⑥带来饮食方面的安全问题 bring about/cause/lead to/results in some problems, such as food safety bring about/cause/lead to/result in such problems as food safety ⑧减轻家长的负担 share parents’ burden lighten parents’ burden 2.变点为句 ①Nowadays it’s common for parents to bring much delicious food to their children at school. Recently it’s often seen that parents bring much food that tastes good/ delicious to their children at school. ②The persons concerned have different opinions on this phenomenon. On this phenomenon, there are different opinions among the persons concerned. On this phenomenon, different people have different opinions. ③Parents are afraid/worried that school food may not cater to their children’s taste. Parents are afraid/worried that the meals served by the school canteen may not satisfy their children. Parents are afraid/worried that their children may not be satisfied with school food ④Parents think it their responsibility/duty to satisfy their children’s needs. Parents think it their responsibility/duty meet their children’s nee