专四大作文辅导讲座.ppt

The development of industry demands large areas of land. The already limited land is decreasing very rapidly. We should make the best use of our land. In cities, a careful and elaborate city plan should be worked out. In the countryside, farmers should be educated to use the land wisely. The government should reinforce the laws to punish those who waste the land. The development of industry demands large areas of land. As a result, the already limited land is decreasing very rapidly. Therefore, we should make the best use of our land. In cities, a careful and elaborate city plan should be worked out. In the countryside, farmers should be educated to use the land wisely. Moreover, the government should reinforce the laws to punish those who waste the land. 加入语篇标记词 Add discourse markers inter-sentence skills 句内技巧 1. synonymous expressions 近义表达 Confidence - faith - build up faith - feel capable of doing sth. lack of confidence - lose heart - feel frustrated 2. antonymous expressions 反义表达 3. diamond words 闪光措辞 take one’s courage in both hands 勇往直前；敢作敢为 have/lack the courage of one’s conviction 有/没有勇气做自己认为对的事 4. get rid of Chinese thinking 摆脱汉语思维 加利福尼亚州南部阳光充足，气候宜人，是拍摄影片的理想场所。 The constant sunshine and mild climate of southern California made it an ideal site for shooting motion pictures. 独享欢乐是一种愉快，独自忧伤也是一种愉快。 Happiness enjoyed alone is a pleasure, so is sorrow tasted privately. 摆脱汉语思维 口试时，问了十个问题，她全都答对了。 She was asked ten questions in the oral examination and answered every one of them correctly. 一群人立刻把他围住了，向他提出一个又一个问题。 Very soon he was surrounded by a crowd and was snowed with questions. Tips 卷面要整洁，令人赏心悦目。 句首一定要大写。 段前要缩进，词间要空格。 不用口语词? （You konw. wanna. gonna. hay ……），不用生僻词。 标点、拼写错误尽量避免。 切记！ ①用恰当的逻辑词表现文章的逻辑性。 ②要注意自然段与主题句的运用，即用自然段表现出文章的逻辑性，并在每段中用主题句说明要点，给人一目了然的感觉。 ③要注意句型结构，注意每句的重心和句与句之间的衔接，使句意一环扣一环，避免松散。 写作训练五法 1 精读 仔细阅读范文，欣赏并标出精彩的用词和句型，体会上下文中表达的精妙，提高对精彩语言的敏感度，要多写，多记。 ⊙2 背诵 背精彩词汇，背精彩句型，背精彩句子，背精彩框架，背精彩段落，通过背诵完成从欣赏到掌握的过程，别人的变成自己的。 3 默写 将背过的句子，段落默写下来，检查核对，看看