中级笔译-总结.ppt

* （英语the ripples of the gentle sea译成汉语时在结构上作了调整，这样译文念起来意思清楚，行文漂亮。） * (1) 一稿初译，忠实为主：初译时要尽量既忠实于原文的内容又忠实于原文的形式，也就是要直译。 (2) 二稿核对，注重逻辑：把初译稿与原文对照进行核对修改，注意检查译文结构的逻辑关系和条理性，根据汉语表达的需要对译文作必要的结构调整。 (3) 三稿定局，润色文字：重读译文，对语言文字进行润色，修改其中一些欧化了的语句（即带有英语味的汉语句子），从而使译文符合规范的汉语表达习惯。 * 原文中隐含的一些逻辑关系，在译文表达中必须清楚地转达出来。否则，译文不是牵强附会，就是与原文貌合神离。 * Analysis: marketing市场营销，包括宣传，与word of mouth冲突(C. Quinn: “The Jeaning of America”) 3. A measure of calm gave signs of returning after the flood subsided. 洪水退了以后，恢复了平静的标志。 * 4. “It’s a gloomy thing, however, to talk about one’s own past, with the day breaking. Turn me in some other direction before I go.” “不过，在天亮时谈个人的往事，真扫兴。在我离开之前，把我转到别的方向吧。” Improve the following translation 1.In the doorway lay at least twelve umbrellas of all sizes and colors. 门口放着至少有十二把各种颜色和尺寸的雨伞 2. The study had three windows, set with little, old-fashioned panes of glass, each with a crack across it. 书房有三个窗户，每个窗户上都嵌有带有裂痕的老式的小块玻璃。 * 3. The broker’s hour is not only crowded, but minutes and seconds are hanging to all the straps and packing both front and rear platforms. 经纪人的时间不但是拥挤的，而且分分秒秒都挂在所有的皮带上，包装在前后的月台上。 4. It was already two years since he was Secretary General of the UN. 他担任联合国秘书长以来已经有两年了。 * Reference answer I will teach him to deceive others. 我要教他去欺骗别人。 = I will punish him so that he will not deceive the others again. 改译：我要教训他一顿，看他还敢不敢骗人。 * 2. This thesis leaves much to be desired. 这篇文章有很多地方让人喜欢。 =This thesis is very imperfect. 改译：这篇论文很不理想。//这篇论文有很多地方可以改进。 * 3. A measure of calm gave signs of returning after the flood subsided. 洪水退了以后，恢复了平静的标志。 a measure of= a degree of/ a certain amount of 改译：洪水退了以后，有点恢复宁静的迹象了。 * 4. “It’s a gloomy thing, however, to talk about one’s own past, with the day breaking. Turn me in some other direction before I go.” “不过，在天亮时谈个人的往事，真扫兴。在我离开之前，把我转到别的方向吧。” 改译：“不过，在天亮时谈个人的往事，真扫兴。我走之前，谈点别的吧。” * Improve the following translation从表达的角度改进下列句子的译文。 1.In the doorway lay at least