四六级作文 第二讲 四六级作文中的常见错误.pptVIP

四级作文中的常见错误; 5. 四级作文中的常见错误; 5. 四级作文中的常见错误;;3. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting heavier and heavier. ;.;.;.;;.;;;5.1.3. 把形容词和介词误作动词;5.1.4. 少用连词;.;.;.;5.2. 句子层面5.2.1. 中国式英语;.;;.;;.;;.;;.;5.6. 拼写错误;.;;CET作文常见错误; 如何用简单句表达复杂思想 ; 大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。 It is impossible for sb. to do sth.. ;It is impossible for刚刚毕业的大学生to找到高薪的工作. college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money。 It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. ;刚刚毕业的大学生可以写成： newly-graduated students 高薪的工作可以写成 well-paying jobs It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs ;上面一句话拆分成为四句： ①每年，都有很多大学生毕业。 ②他们都想找到工作。 ③这些工作可以给他们很多钱。 ④这是不可能的。 ①Every year, many college students graduate. ②They all want to find jobs. ③These jobs can give them a lot of money. ④This is impossible. ;润色 ： Many →→heaps and heaps of (一批一批的) from universities →→from universities and institutes Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. ;②＋③ They all want to find jobs，which can give them a lot of money. give →→ offer a lot of money →→ handsome salaries 加一个插入语：they hope，放在which后面 They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries. ;④用but连接 impossible →→ hardly possible They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible. ;Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible. （32个词 ） It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs (10个词) It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money.; 从可以掌控的东西出发 复杂的汉语思想分解成为简单句 学会想简单的句子，然后表达成为简单句 再加工 （换词 或 连句 ）