毕业典礼考前预测英语作文.pptVIP

Summary 阅读材料文体：说明文 说明文概括四个模板： 模板1. “对象+性质功用+利好” 模板2. “问题+解决方法” 模板3. “现象+原因+结果” 模板4. “现象+影响” Summary 要点： 现象：High school students in Western countries… have a prom to mark their graduation 原因/意义：1. It’s to mark the time kids turn into young men and women. 2. It means they are no longer …dependent… 过程：第二段 （由于本文不是记叙文，“过程”并不是最重要的，需要高度概括） summary: High school students in Western countries celebrate their graduation by having a prom where they dress up, have fun and say goodbye to each other. Proms help to mark their independence on parents and teachers. Summary In western countries, there is usually a prom held for high school students to mark their graduation and independence, where the graduates dress in formal clothes and have fun together. (30 words) 刘瑜 主体部分存在的主要问题 审题不够仔细，漏写题目； 审题不认真，不按题目要求，写了不该写的，该写的又没写，离题； 把“你理想的毕业庆祝活动”写成“你想怎样庆祝你的毕业”； 立意太“庸俗”，大部分作文的主题为“吃喝玩乐”； “原因理由”不够充分。 1. 你理想的毕业庆祝活动是怎样的？ There are many ways to celebrate graduation including having photos taken with your classmates and teaches, or dining out together and exchange gifts. To mark the significance of graduation, I would call upon my fellow students to donate useful reference books to the school library. 2. 请详细叙述你的理由： The advantages of donating reference books are far-reaching, in the first place, it is the final contribution we can possible make to the school library which we owe a great debt of gratitude in the past three years. Moreover, the student participants learn and practice the ideas of “to give is better than to receive”. Last but not least, we can never fail to understand that resources are more efficiently recycled in the way that money is saved for those who need reference books. We couldn’t grow up happily and healthily without their love, so it’s high time we should convey our gratitude to them.詹咏桐 As for me, I prefer to travel together as a celebration of our graduation. We can travel together to some place nearby with many places of interest. 陈嘉宇 When