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Intro Body =TS+ ex.+eg+ summa… 1,句句串联 2. 词句 3.词词 4. 副词 5. 特殊句式 conclusion sp 1. 通过在不同的岗位工作，我们提议提升不同的技能。 Question: 什么岗位？ 什么技能的提升？ 销售 随机应变（） 人力资源 协调能力（。。） 财务 Office 能力 the more posts that we have once worked on, the more skills we could gain. Here are some examples. The examples are widely available. Let me be more specific； if someone has ever worked as a salesperson, then chances are large that he would be more flexible when encountering(in the face of) different customers. More specifically, when what the customer care about is the product quality, then the salesman has to provide the most professional illustration of the product function in order to promote the sales. But if consumers regard purchasing experience as the more important factor, then the salesman has to adjust the strategy: he just needs to praise the good taste of the customer in order to sell a product. Likewise/similarly/in addition/besides/also.... If a person has ever worked in the human resources department, then what we can expect from him is the better coordinating ability, which means he basically could arrange the human resources in the company more scientifically to minimize the human cost. For example, once there is addition work waiting for staff to do, the better way is to ask for the workers who have unsaturated workload to fulfill the extra tasks, rather than to hire new employees to accomplish the additional work. This both maximizes the human resource efficiency and promotes employees’ satisfaction. Therefore, now that people accumulate various skills in different posts, why not try to work on divergent positions to sharpen the competitive edge in the future? Summarization 1. 语言部分，用条件句挺多，但不局限；没有固定的句式，根据需要选择 2. 内容部分；素材需要积累，并且重复使用 #在不同岗位工作提升的技能# 大学生在大学的时候是否应该兼职工作？ 大学生一年应该连续学习11各月？ To begin with, the more job preparations the university provides, the sharper competitive edges students could be armed with when seeking for jobs. Let me