考研1号考研英语《写作160篇》读者作文练习与修改点评.docVIP

考研1号考研英语《写作160篇》读者作文练习与修改点评 写作原文 As is subtly illustrated in the portrayal, there is a letter sent by a son, on which writes only three Chinese characters---dad, money, son, which means that the son is turning for some money to his father, without mentioning anything else in the letter. 这里用”on which…”作letter的定语，再用 “which…”作这封信只有三个字这件事的定语，这样的定语从句可以用吗？我个人感觉写出来有些冗余, 不知道这样算好还是不好,还请老师批评改正！ The cartoonist, through the lively drawing, intends to convey the implication that the family relationships is in decline to some extent. Since most family has only one child, parents often show so much love to