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2011年12月英语四级考试作文真题及范文 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Outlines: 　　1. 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。 　　2.意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命 　　3. 学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will ??? No great work can be performed without will. We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some trick of luck. But when we know their histories, we find that it is long years of will and constant effort（持续的努力） that have brought about(呈现) their success.（强调句） Just as we can’t reach the top of a mountain without climbing, we can’t achieve success without will. ??? The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibility of becoming successful overnight. Actually that is not the case. Before these people become successful, a lot of hard work has been done, unnoticed mostly. What we usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling(努力) forward and wrestling with （全力对付，努力克服）internal or external obstacles（障碍）. Take “quitting smoking” for example, which is , to most people , a difficult task, so people always give up the idea for they don’t have the strong will. In a nutshell, strong will is an important condition or role of the success the individual should desire to (渴望)maintain forever. There is no instant success in this world. Strong will is the best policy to make your life distinct and your dreams come true. Analysis ○ paraphrase of the thesis statement ++ synonyms of the key words in the thesis Succeed Strong will -- unclear organization (esp. para. 2) (1 ts) No great work can be performed without will. (paraphrase of the thesis statement (2 ds) We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some trick of luck. (3) But when w