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* 作文中出现的主要问题： 1.审题：是你打算怎么做，不是建议别人可以怎么做 2.掉点：同学们的具体做法 3.文章比例：做法与理由的篇幅 4.时态： 5.书面：不能用涂改液、铅笔，压线，间距，篇幅，每段开头空两格 用词： 1.appreciate: appreciate your helping me appreciate your kindness appreciate what they have done for me appreciation: show our appreciation to them 2.Pay off: My hard work finally paid off. 3.We should do what we can to make them happy in return for their love. 4. sacrifice…for… ……advocated that Senior Three students should something special for their parents on their 18th birthday. All the students were actively in response to it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some