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商贸汉英翻译评论 中国贸易报1994年4月15日河北专版 原文：自1990起，公司已连续三年在中国进出口额最大的500家外贸企业中进入前三十位。 译文：Our company has been awarded one of the first 30 enterprises among China’s 500 largest foreign trade enterprises in the past 3years，since1990. 九星牌录放像机介绍 原文：该机是市场紧俏产品，既是音响又是精美的高档家具。 译文：This product is deeply welcome when it entered market is not only welcome sound but also high-grade furniture. 原文: 我方保证决不重犯这种错误。 原译文: We assure you that this error will never occur again. 原译文句法上无问题, 但承诺用词太绝对。原文中的“保证”译成assure , 会使自己无退路。贸易中出现错误是难免的, “保证” (assure) 一旦作出, 再出现错误便无法解释。对方若抓住此话, 在你出错时诉诸法律, 你就毫无办法。因此, 原译文虽句法正确, 却不合商贸习惯, 若改译为: We will do all we can to prevent a repetition of this error. 回旋余地便可大大增加。 原文: 我方确定所交货物质量与样品相同。 译文: We confirm that the goods sent are equal in quality to the sample. 原译文将“相同”译成equal , 会使说话人无回旋余地。equal 是“完全相等”之意, 而大批交货一般不可能与样品完全相同。若买方因质量问题与卖方发生纠纷时,卖方很可能会因equal 一词而处于被动地位。所以, 原文中的“相同”宜译为similar , 以留有余地。全句可试改译为: We confirm that the goods sent are similar in quality to the sample. 北京松下彩电显像管有限公司介绍手册 原文 纲领：决心贯彻产业人的本份，立求改善并提高社会生活，以期为世界文化的发展作出贡献。 目标：BMCC要精诚一致向CPT的国际竞争挑战。 译文：Basic Objective: To recognize our responsibilities as industrialists, to foster progress, to promote the general welfare of society, and to devote ourselves to the future development of world culture. The objective of BMCC: BMCC is ready to challenge the CPT’s international competition with absolute sincerity and unity. 唐山市招商引资介绍 原文：1987年国务院批准唐山市为沿海经济开放城市。 原译文：In 1987, the State Department approved Tangshan city to be a costal, economic open zone. 原文：潍坊风筝历史悠久。具有选工精细，形象逼真，造形美观，放飞平稳，娱乐欣赏兼可等特点。 译文：Weifang Kites have a long famed history. It is renowned for its fine and delicate craftsmanship, vivid shape, smooth gliding and is particularly enjoyable for relaxation and appreciation. 开包后，请尽早食用，以保持风味鲜美。(加力加儿童食品) 原译文：Please eat as quickly as you can after opening it. And you will find it delicious and its unique flavor. 四川省对外经贸(宣传册) 原文：四川省房地产开发总公司系经四川省政府批准成立。 译文：Approving by Sichuan provincial government, Sichuan Real Estate Dev