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食品安全问题 到底什么是天龙八部？？？？ 简单理解，就是八个可以在第二段当中构思的方面。第二段最好是总分总的夹心式写法，论点点明深刻含义（或者先由浅入深），好事结论用反面论证，坏事用威胁性总结，而中间的5大可以使用的方面分别是：象征点，现状+原因分析，IN OTHER WORDS（影响和后果分析），举例联系实际，和层进的修辞手法。其中最最最关键的是原因分析和后果分析。注意到，这八个方面是可以构思的方面，不是要都写，都写的话，这一段一般人过200，高手过1000. P2注意尽量控制在6-7句以内. 下面将就今年重大的食品安全问题，来简单阐述一下P2的思想，并且教授如何有效简化P2的思路。所有的论据如下： 1.?????? 现状（罗列除了很多可以参考的写法） 1）The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing/increasing/expanding/mounting numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food. 2）The past several years are accompanied by the dramatic increase of unsafe food. 3）The unprecedented economic development over the past several years is accompanied by the dramatic increase of unsafe food. 4）We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors, all of which are sounding an alarm to our society. 2.?????? 原因（写一条就可以，不写也没问题，但是要让文章显得有深度最好分析一下原因） 1). 人们为了追求利润，而丧失了道德底线 2). 国家监管不力，相关法律并未完善，给了不法分子漏洞 3). 万能BT理由，社会压力巨大。。。 1）Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon. 2）The reason for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, ascribe it to the following interrelated factors. （1，2两句作用相同，都是引出两条原因。注意没必要两条，一条就够，两条主要是为了层次感） 3）具体的两条理由，On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to /totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business. On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating. 3.?????? 后果/影响 Professional dishonesty undoubtedly exerts an adverse consequence on our society. Initially, they adversely affect the health condition of numerous consumers, for the reason that consumers can not easily recognize them. Additionally, fake goods pose a probable and potential t