苏教版五年级上册习1：写一位给自己留下深刻印象的老师.docVIP

苏教版五年级上册 《习作1：写一位给自己留下深刻印象的老师》 【教学目标】 1．读懂例文《我的班主任》，领会作者怎样通过具体生动的事例，把人物描写得细腻感人的。 2．能通过讨论交流，学会围绕中心选择材料，要选择有代表性的生动事例写好人物的形象 外貌、语言、动作、心理活动等 我要感谢老师王老师当侦探我的经典启蒙老师谢谢您，林老师老师的手有趣的老师在我心目中的好老师温柔漂亮严格的老师对能充分表现文章中心思想的外貌，语言、动作、表情等细小环节作具体、细致的描写 不足之处：未能充分辅助学生打开素材。原因有二：一是教师没能完全走进学生内心，师生之间还存在一定的情感距离，有些学生不愿意把自己的烦恼说出来。二是学生在倾诉烦恼时思维较为局限，仅限于学习压力大、与父母关系紧张等，出现这种情况关键在于我的引导不到位。 教学建议：对学生的语言表达要充分重视。课堂上学生在说话与习作过程中出现的表达上的欠缺，教师应及时、有效地给予指导评价。写作知识与技巧的传授固然重要，但是归根结底都要落实到语言表达上来，这就要求教师在强化表达意识的同时还应不断提高自己的文学素养。 thrift of excellent traditional and style lack deep of understanding, one-sided think in now of good situation Xia, economic smooth more fast development, and reform made major progress, and people living significantly improve, and social the career made new progress, no necessary always hard has, no awareness to China also has many poverty area, and also has many poverty population of exists, more living improve has, more need keep hard of style. Three is not strictly honest. 　　Total thought units is a water sector, clean self-discipline away from himself too far, no real processing good living of improve and hard, and thrift excellent traditional of relationship, no effective do comply with Constitution and party of regulations must from I do up, no right mercy good bitter Le, and wealth of relationship, no right awareness to in comply with Constitution and party of regulations aspects everyone has accountability. Four, future direction and improvement measures 1, belief and faith, strengthen party spirit. One is to firmly establish the noble ideals of struggle for the ideals of communism, communist struggle for life, ready to sacrifice everything for the party and the people. Second is to continuously improve the quality and standard of political, conscientiously study Deng Xiaoping theory and three represents important thought and the scientific Outlook on development, implement the partys basic program for the primary stage of socialism, adhere to the correct political orientation, maintain h