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现象评论式议论文写作 大埔县虎山中学 饶超然 对某种社会现象、倾向或社会问题进行剖析的文章往往在文章一开始首先引出这种现象或问题，然后评论。 B． 产生的原因 C． 对社会和我们生活的影响 D． 如何采取恰当措施 E． 前景的预测 模板： Nowadays ,there are more and more … in some big cities . It is thought that 用具体数据说明XX现象. Why have there been so many… ? Maybe the reasons are as follows. The first one is that 原因一 . Besides, 原因二 . The third reason is 原因三 . In fact, it has had a bad effect on …. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing , 解决建议一 . For another, 解决建议二 . Only in this way can we …. 议论文的写作一般按“提出问题——分析问题——解决问题”的步骤进行。比如对“减肥”这一现象作出分析评论： Losing Weight Nowadays, many people are very much worried about being overweight. And people, the young and women in particular, are trying various ways to lose weight. （提出问题） There are many reasons why more and more people are concerned about losing weight. To begin with, they are all aware of the danger of being overweight, which may lead to many diseases such as hyper-tension, diabetes and heart attacks. Secondly, more people have become concerned about their shape and they want to appear energetic and young. What’s more, losing weight can help them feel mentally healthier and build up their self-esteem. （分析问题） There are different means through which people can achieve their goal of losing weight. First of all, some of the people who want to remove their fat eat less or eat nothing. Besides, they?take weight-reducing drugs. But the most effective and healthy way to lose weight is to take proper exercises.（解决问题） 引出现象/问题的常用句型 1. With the rapid development of society/modern life/science and technology/people’s living standard, an increasing number of people have become aware of the importance of … 2. Recently, the issue of … has become? increasingly controversial. 3. Nowadays, a large number of students have become concerned about … 4. In many cities, people… 5. When it comes to…, 如：In many big cities, a growing number of young married couples are decidin