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EnglishforJournalismLesson9Correctthesequotesusingtherulesforpunctuationandattribution(fornextclass)“Ourgoalispeace”.claimedthepresident.BenjaminFranklinsaid:“deathtakesnobribes”.Answer“Ourgoalispeace,”thepresidentsaid.BenjaminFranklinsaid,“Deathtakesnobribes.”Thelawyersaid,“Herippedthelife-sustainingrespiratortubesfromhisthroatthreetimesinanefforttodie.Heissimplyaman”thelawyercontinued“whorejectsmedicaltreatmentregardlessoftheconsequences.Hewantstodieandhasaconstitutionalrighttodoso.”AnswerThelawyersaid:“Herippedthelife-sustainingrespiratortubesfromhisthroatthreetimesinanefforttodie.Heissimplyamanwhorejectsmedicaltreatmentregardlessoftheconsequences.Hewantstodieandhasaconstitutionalrighttodoso.”AileenSchwartzcommented,“NationalHonorSocietylooksgoodonacollegeapplicationbecauseitisbasedongrades.” “Nooneremembersnow,butthiscafeteriausedtobepaintedbrightpink.Sincesomanystudentsclaimedtheyhadtroubledigestingtheirlunch,itwasfinallydecidedtochangethecolortobeige,”saidLuciaGomez,headoftheFoodServicesDivisionsince1985.Answer“NationalHonorSocietylooksgoodonacollegeapplicationbecauseitisbasedongrades,”saidAileenSchwartz.AccordingtoLuciaGomez,headoftheFoodServicesDivisionsince1985,thecafeteriausedtobepaintedbrightpink. “Sincesomanystudentsclaimedtheyhadtroubledigestingtheirlunch,itwasfinallydecidedtochangethecolortobeige,”saidGomez.Features:theleadA featurelede doesnthavetohavethewho,what,where,whenandwhyintheveryfirstparagraph,thewayahard-newslededoes.Andafeatureledecanrunforseveralparagraphsinsteadofjustone.Features:theleadQuickburstlead –Thisleadcontainsaseriesofterse,directstatements,muchlikeahow-toarticle:Startwithleanproteins.Addantioxidant-richfruitsandvegetables.Gethealthyfatsfromnuts,seeds,fishoil,andgrass-fedbeef.Thesearethebasicsofthe Paleo diet–thehealthiestwaytoeat.Surpriselead –Thisleadincludesanelementofsurprise:New,compellingevidenceshowsthatcuttingsaturatedfatsmayactuallyhurthearthealthratherthanprotectit.Contrastlead –Thistypeofleadmakesapointbyopeningwithdi