2014年高考热点透析：高考英语书面表达.pptVIP

审图： 整体审图，搞清楚事情发生的原 因、经过及结果，具体内容有： 事情发生的时间、地点、人物， 发生了什么事情，就是包括5个 1.每幅图表达的要点： 路遇外国人，了解他们的困难； 2. 审题后进入写作 （1）逐图列要点的英文表达方式： 图一： walk in the street, come across a foreign couple: with a map in his hand, reading it, wonder where to go. （2）列出连接词，因为本文为记叙文，可以按照时 间顺序写，使文章连贯，逻辑关系清楚。 This morning, when I was hanging out on the nearby street, I came across a foreign couple. As the puzzled look appeared on their face, with a map of Beijing in hand, I came up to them and asked if they needed any help. After several words in English, I got it that they were heading to the Summer Palace and wondering how to get there. Without delay, I together with them went to the bus station and told them the bus they could catch. （3）连词成文 （4）检查 要点是否全，有无细节； 连接词使用是否恰当； 分析: 篇章布局合理，前面两段记叙了事情发生、发展过程，结尾段写了个人感受。 要点和细节覆盖情况：第一、二段要点细节全部覆盖。 This morning, when I was hanging out on the nearby street, I came across a foreign couple. As the puzzled look appeared on their face, with a map of Beijing in hand, I came up to them and asked if they needed any help. After several words in 连接词运用恰当：This morning, when I was…, As…, After several words in English…, Without delay…, Several minutes later…, Seeing…, As…, 句式、用词丰富：hanging out，came across，the puzzled look，appeared生动，After several words in English, I got it that…，heading to, Without delay, Seeing the foreign couple got on the bus, I waved goodbye to them and…, flashed back, 依然有语法错误，会影响得分。 例如： As the puzzled look appeared on their face, with a map of Beijing in hand, I came up to them and asked if they needed any help. …they were heading to the Temple of Heaven… Seeing the foreign couple got on the bus…, 3 . 作文中容易出现的问题： 审题有误；遗漏要点或细节，时态混乱，用词错误， 中文式英文，文章连贯性差，不流畅，语言不丰富。 * 2014高考英语书面表达指导 1 . 课标对写作能力要求。 八级： （1）能根据所读文章进行转述或写摘要。 一、高考对书面表达能力要求。 九级： （1）能用英文书写摘要、报告、通知和公务信函等。 （2）能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景、态度和感情。 （3）能阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点，文体恰当，用词准确。 2 . 考试大纲的要求 要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。