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Faulty: The essay is poorly organized, there is no central idea. Improved: The essay is poorly organized: there is no central idea.The essay is poorly organized; there is no central idea. Faulty: There were people who would be glad to see him leave the place, he knew it. Improved: There were people who would be glad to see him leave the place, and he knew it. There were people who would be glad to see him leave the place - and he knew it. Faulty: The principal of the school may do something to reduce the pupils homework load, he may, for example, stop assigning homework for Saturday and Sund