2016 最常犯的十种作文错误.pptVIP

最常犯的九种作文错误 1 状语前置 1 Because of the polluted air, every year several people die of lung cancer and other respiratory diseases. 2 When I travel around the world, in different restaurants I find it very interesting to experience varied food. 2. 悬垂错误（分词短语，不定式，动名词，介词短语和省略从句） 1 By reading newspapers and watching TV, your English will be improved rapidly. 2 Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach. 3 Without rest, four days have passed. 4 To appreciate the poem, it must be read aloud. 3. 用词不准确 1 The gas from big factories, cars and families are often harmful. (waste) 2 The circumstances are now seriously polluted. (environment) 3 I am not used to thick tea. (strong) 汉语中的“浓”在英语中要根据不同的搭配选用不同的词，如dense, strong, thick, heavy, dark等等。 例如：浓茶 strong tea 浓墨 dark/thick ink 浓雾 dense/thick/heavy fog 浓妆 heavy makeup 4 断句 1 TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it. 2 I believe it would be most beneficial for a country or city. If its government spent more money on improving public transportation. 3 Almost our every basic skill came from experiences. Such as walking, articulating, reading, even thinking. 5 累赘 1 He wrote the novel. The fact that he wrote the novel made him well-known in the country. 2 My mother has gone to the shops to buy things. 6 歧义（指代不明） 1 Jim was in the same class with Terry, but he was not a good boy. 2 There is a big house in the old lane which is more than 100 years old. 7 残句 1 After graduated from the University. My friend became a teacher. 2 Feeling very confident. I began my speech. 3 The air here very fresh. 4 She always turns to her mother when she in trouble. 8 中式英语 1 My Dad really very love me. 2 My parents married in 1965 in Xi’an. 9 搭配不当 1 At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so that we can be well prepared for our future career. 2 In July, they will make part in the final term examinations. 3 I managed to keep mys