错误——— 正确 ——— 完美.ppt

错误——— 正确 ——— 完美 高考书面表达句子的美化 一、错误及改正篇 First I’m mistaken, then I’m right. He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. Learn from the mistakes of others and prevent your own. Correct the mistakes if you have committed them, and avoid them if you have not. (一)不一致主谓不一致、数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致 She closed the door and hurries away to class. She closed the door and hurried away to class. If I have time, I come again. If I have time, I will come again. 修饰语错位 I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 注意英汉差异 （三）句子不完整 口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气等来交流，但书面语，句子结构不完整就是语法错误。 There are many ways to know the society. For example by tv, radio, newspaper and so on. （四）逻辑错误 语法没问题，意义上分析，句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。 At the age of ten, my grandfather died. (五)词性误用 每个单词要注意拼写、读音、词性、词义及用法 有些同学经常将介词当动词用、形容词当副词用、名词当动词用。 Can you tell Asia elephants from Africa elephants? Can you tell Asian elephants from African elephants? My roommate doesn’t afraid of dogs. My roommate isn’t afraid of dogs. （六）指代不清 代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。 Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. （七）不间断错误 按照英语语法，完整的句子与句子之间应有连接词链接。 It was my turn, I was very nervous. When it was my turn, I was very nervous. The picture is about a poor little girl lived in old China . The picture is about a poor little girl who lived in old China In our country there are many people like to live in the countryside. In our country many people like to live in the countryside. (八)措词毛病 学生写作文时往往随心所欲地使用单词，尤其是汉语式英语比比皆是。这就要求学生平时学习单词要仔细思考，勤查词典，弄清他们的确切意思和用法，以免造成错误。 1.近来， 我们村发生了很大的变化。 Recently，your village has taken place great changes. Recently great changes have taken place in our village. She cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary. The dictionary cost him five yuan. His friends are few. He has few friends. The population of China is many The population of China is large. He will remember firmly what the teacher said and did. He will remember clearly what the tea