南京英语中考复习——学生写作中的问题与对策 (2015-5-18).ppt

学生写作中的问题与对策 1、熟悉书面表达评分标准 B. 标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如： 汉语 英语 A. 句号 。 . B. 省略号 …… … C. 顿号 、 无 C.不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。多用简单句，慎用复合句。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 D. 运用适当的连接词 一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如: 表示时间顺序：first, second, then, next, finally/at last , soon, immediately, suddenly… 表示并列关系：and, as well as, or… 表示转折关系：but, yet, however… 表示时间关系：when, while, after, before, then... 表示递进关系： besides，what’s more 表示因果关系：so, therefore, as a result… 表示目的的：in order to/ that , so as to/ that… 表示列举的：for example , such as… 表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word… 行文连贯 假如你叫王林，是动物保护协会的一名成员。你经常利用节假日在动物园作义务导游员。你将为来自澳大利亚的中学生作导游，请你根据图示及英文提示词语写一个参观计划。 Welcome to the zoo , everyone ! I’m glad to show you around the zoo . I’m Wang Lin . I’m a middle-school student . Let me tell you our plan for today . we will visit the Lion Park . Next is the Monkey Park . There are clever and lovely monkeys. we will walk to the Bird World where all kinds of beautiful birds are waiting for us . You can see all kinds of birds there . we’ll go to the Panda Park. Remember , don’t feed the animals . As animals are our friends , we should protect them and take care of them . Thank you . I’m sure you’ll have a good time . First, Then After that , 连接词魅力无限 E.锦上添花,适当评论,发表己见。 How friendly they are! We can learn from them. They enjoyed themselves very much. What a happy family. F.成文之后 A. 一般语法项目的检查 人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 时态: They go to the island last week. 主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 习惯用法: He helps me in my English 冠词用法： He is a honest student. B. 注意语序 (感叹句,疑问句,宾语从句) How happy are they! What he