写作201.ppt

写作试题省评分细则解读 3.良好（22—25分）：紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容较充实；基本无语言大错，小错不超过6个，且基本不影响意思表达。 4.一般（18—21分）：紧扣主题；基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言大错不超过3处，语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。 大小错误的界定： 1.小错误：单词拼写、冠词、大小写、 标点符号错误； 2.大错误：搭配错误、词汇用错（介 词、名词、动词、形容词、副词）、 时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动 词、句式等错误。 汉式英语属于大错！！ 3.使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般) The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级) 住洗荆奸叉绵青拓好园鳖湛貌蒋酗铣晒度叹艘慰彤碗徊修桔潮矾菜滩睡址写作2013写作2013 4.使用强调句 Communication is very important . (一般) It is communication that counts. (高级) 旨笨木御伺裤搓氢迎蒋冒惩猖竟窍汹鞠匪吸恃纹浙贤不婴徽许完氛挂舟颈写作2013写作2013 5.使用倒装句 I can make progress in this way. (一般) Only in this way can I make progress. (高级) 脐沮乾狰马咯概速乍空腹显颓捍汰漂辫叠此绥陈场凛旗逸囚闺志阻冶义咐写作2013写作2013 2.使用经典表达 周镣贡鄙遗羔枢裸贸岁骏揩气龚贷轩绷辞豪炼躯厦屹罩集娜特调豪跃拯减写作2013写作2013 1.We should attach importance to English study. 2.We can’t emphasize the importance of time too much. 3.While the Internet is of great help, I don’t think it’s good for you to spend too much time on it. 4. Studying abroad can broaden our horizons and enrich our life. 苇玛贵眉首禁盛额磋淌诸缴扁载验莱蟹哉伶奏纵毙昏秉瑰缀忙御膝陀嘱迈写作2013写作2013 5. The reason why he failed to pass the exam was that he didn’t put his heart into study. 6.In addition, you should have built up your confidence and don’t lose heart. 7. He has developed the habit of rising early. 8. An increasing number of people are in favor of the opinion. 翻瞪促磕稀潞巷祷竖惊犀惕钧纹吧围腑疆荣臆节猛琴碟犹印坡处滥钞妖柯写作2013写作2013 3.使用谚语 憾彼光梦拒埋峨椽烟建胚愿巷熬茄用甸统谦漂东内将荡髓狡凯县检是税玉写作2013写作2013 1.All roads lead to Rome. 条条道路通罗马。 2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 3.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日建成。 4.Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 5.Well begun is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。 桐唐兵腻圆陨督葬遂阮废注桩屿廉隆皋腋犁惰嘿贸嘎痢狱挑脓朔粹吏扁昏写作2013写作2013 6.Strike while the iron is hot. 趁热打铁。 7.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 8.A friend in need is a friend indeed.