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5）I attached our e-catalog for your reference, 首先这是一整句话，最后要用句号，不是逗号。还有，第一人称太多了，先是I，再是We，现在又是I开头的句子，句型太单调了，会让看的人觉得很无聊。如果换成Attached our e-catalogue for your reference!或者Enclosed our e-catalogue for your review!是不是会稍微好一点？ 6）Any demands please kindly contact with us. 一开始就谈“需求”是不是太直接了？如果换成有任何问题，请随时联系我们，会不会更加委婉一些？ Dear sirs, From the internet, we get your company name. What I want is just to see that if we have the chance to cooperate in the near future or not. We are a factory of fiberglass in China and our main product is chopped strand mat and stitch chopped strand mat and etc. We have been in the field for many years. I can give you the product in very competitive price and higher quality. If you need more information, PLS go to our website:www.***.com. I wonder if you need this product; if you are interested in our products, pls kindly return this mail. Maybe now you have regular business partner. If so, pls leave my message in your email box, maybe someday it will be useful. if you need the price to compare with your partner gives, welcome! Yours sincerely, Jack Hi sir, Glad to hear that youre in the market for fiberglass. We specialize in this field for several years, with the strength of chopped strand mat and stitch chopped strand mat, with good quality and pretty competitive price. Should you have any questions, pls contact me. FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation. TKSBR JACK *** company Tel: Fax: Web: To: Judy White???????????? From: Peter Liang Subject: Hand tool supplier Dear Judy, Glad to know that youre in the market for hand tools from the Canton Fair. We supply various kinds of tools with good quality and reasonable price, and very familiar with ANSI, BS, DIN, NFJIS tool standards. Per visiting your company web, I found that you have several chain stores in Europe, US and Janpan. It is our pleasure to find a way to cooperate with you! Here attached some photos for our showroom and some current hot-selling items. Iwill send you the offer sheet,