2012届高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评四课件(开放式作文).ppt

* * * * 假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文： 1.简要描述下图的内容，并点明主题； 2.联系实际，谈谈出现此现象的原因及解决办法。 注意：1.词数不少于120个； 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校。提示词：蜗牛snail 讲评 从漫画中两只蜗牛中一只所说的话“Look! They are moving more slowly than us”可以看出两只蜗牛在开玩笑来取笑路上拥挤的汽车比它们还要跑得慢。由此我们可以推断：交通拥挤问题的严重性。 ①From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us. It actually shows us one of the most serious problems. As we all know, the issue of heavy traffic has long been a problem. ②In the picture, there are two snails playing a joke about the cars on the crowded roads. How slowly they are moving. The picture conveys us the message that heavy traffic is a serious problem. ③In the picture, two snails are playing a joke about the cars on the crowded roads. They are moving so slowly that we can’t help thinking of the seriousness of heavy traffic. ④From the picture we can see two snails are joking about the cars which are moving very slowly on the crowded roads. This humorous picture isn’t just to amuse us but actually shows us one of the most serious problems. That is, heavy traffic is a serious problem. 分析现象产生的原因可以从下列考生比较熟悉的几个方面来考虑： 随着经济的发展，私家车的增加； 随着汽车的增加和城市人口的增加，一些道路等交通设施仍然没有得到改善；行人交通意识的淡薄等等。 ①But why does this happen? I think several factors contribute to this phenomenon. Firstly, with the rapid development of our countrys economy, more and more cars are coming into common families, which causes serious traffic jams. Secondly, with a large number of population and numbers of cars increasing, although the government puts a large amount of money on building or repairing roads every year, the quality of the roads is not satisfactory. What’s worse, some public transportation still remain unimproved. Thirdly, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic. ②There are many causes for this problem, but the following may be the most important ones. The first cause is the gr