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重视语言的表达 考英语写作的目的是什么？应看到，考中国学生的英语作文，其目的并不是看你把这个作文题论述得如何好，把内容提示的都表达出来（当然这也是一个方面），但更重要的是考你的英语语言的能力，考你的英语表达能力。因此，在英语写作考试中，不仅仅是把内容写出来就可以了，而应更多地考虑怎么把自己的语言水平表现出来。许多考生没有意识到这一点，他们是想到什么词，就写什么词，没有停下来稍微考虑一下：有没有比这个词更好、更贴切的词，有没有比这个句子更生动、更有力的句子结构。 应该看到，我们的阅卷人员几乎都是中国教师，而不是外国人，因此他们更重视的是语言，也就是说，是你的用词用句的漂亮使你的文章赢得阅卷人的好感而得到高分，而不是你论述如何出色而帮助你得分。在内容基本雷同、语言普遍平淡的作文中，出现一篇用词、用句都不同寻常的文章，就立即使阅卷人眼睛一亮，作文高分就往往是这样产生的。下面例1是一篇高分的作文（尽管在结构上，一致性上和连贯性上都存在很多问题）。 The Two-Day Weekend The advance of science and technology makes people have more free time. Nowadays, we have 5-workday week. Therefore, our university and college students can have much more leisure time. Sports fans can play in the playground. Some students who are interested in social work can join many clubs. Of course, we also can get a part time job to gain some work experience. There is a growing concern over the students who dont put too much emphasis on study. Some students always idle away their time, playing cards, drinking, gambling. These problems are really serious. Taking into account all these factors, we can safely come to the conclusion that the students will waste more time if they dont make good use of it. As a student, busy as I am with my study, I also do many interesting things such as reading novels, writing articles at the two-day weekend. All work no play makes Jack a dull boy. Its really true! There is a growing concern over, put too much emphsis on, idle away their time, Taking into account all these factors, make good use of it, busy as I am with my study All work no play makes Jack a dull boy 这些词句就像沙漠中的金子闪闪发光，不能不使阅卷人感到欣喜。 实际上，所谓的金子无非是语言的variety, 即用词的变化，用句的变化，就语言而论不存在哪个词好，哪个词不好，哪个句子结构好，哪句子结构不好的说法。所谓语言漂亮是指语言的变化。 为什么在大学英语精读教程里学了这么多丰富的词汇和精彩的表达，到写的时候全用不上？除了其他原因，其中一条就是没有有意识地注意语言表达的方式。一想到“使”就是make ；一要表达“不仅，而且”的意思就用not only... but also；一要说“人们认为”就是people think ；甚至出现 More and more people who become more and more rich can buy more and more TV这样的句子。 要改变语言贫乏这一毛病，这就需要平时注意积累对同一意思的不同表达法，在写作时善于变化。在以下各例中，请读者注意用b）标