大学英语四级写作(精编资料 ).ppt

大学英语四级写作 段落写作 一、段落结构 主题句 (topic sentence) 发展句 (developing sentence) 结论句 ( concluding sentence) 1、段落的总体结构： 2、Model Diligence is the key factor of success. ①Diligence gives every person proper work to do. ②Many men have become great because of their hard work. ③Diligence can make a foolish person wise and a poor man rich. Thus, we know that diligence is important to our work and life. 3、段落的结构特点 一个段落只有一个主题。 主题句一般应放在句首。 所有的发展句必须服务于段落主题句。 如有必要，以结论句重述段落的主题，但在用词上，结论句不宜与主题句重复。 我们作文中段落的结构错误 1.主题句缺失. 2.发展句不支持主题句. 3. 结论句和主题句相同. 4. 发展句重复. 1. As a matter of fact, every coin has two sides. For example, many students are addicted to online games and don’t study hard. 2. I’d like you to choose computer science. Computer is so popular in present society, you can find a good job if you learn it. History is also a good major, you will become learned if you choose history. 3. In my opinion, I think we should say “thank you” to our parents, because your parents ……. So I think we should say “thank you” to your parents. 4. There are at least three reasons for this phenomenon. On the one hand, the main cause lies in that some students are very shy. Even though they love their parents, they don’t know how to express. On the other hand, our traditional education makes some students more conservative. 二、段落的写作模式 1 、扩张 2、收拢 3、先扩张后收拢 1、扩张 扩张就是演绎（deduction). 其写作模式为： （过渡词）发展句1 主题句 （过渡词）发展句2 （过渡词）发展句3 Model 1 In fact, fresh water on the globe is quite limited. On the one hand, the growing population and rapid development of industrialization demand more consumption of fresh water. On the other hand, sources of fresh water are reportedly polluted due to inefficient control of industrial and life waste. ( 1996 06 CET-4) Model 2 There are two kinds of friends whom we usually come across. One is good, and the othe