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高二英语高考作文讲评课设计?????????????????????????Assessment practice of Writing教学过程：一： 展示考题2008年奥运会刚刚落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议．假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由．内容包括．１．向公众开放，用于健身２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益３．开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客．４．………Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper.………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………二、评价原则：英语写作作为一种测试形式，主要考查考生在词汇、句法、篇章等方面的综合运用语言的能力。该部分要求考生根据所提供的材料，写出一篇120个字左右的短文。要求要点齐全，内容清楚、表达连贯；结构完整；逻辑性强；主题突出；用词及文体恰当。根据高考英语书面表达题的评分标准，一篇高质量的短文必须符合下面四个纬度：1、内容：要点全，拓展有度，有效。2、语法：准确，复杂语法结构，高级词汇，多种句型。3、框架（组织结构）：连接词，作文结构紧凑，流畅。4、开放：能引起读者的共鸣。三、学生出现的错误：1. 单词拼写或词性转换错误Give you some adviseI just provide you my own suggests.They can attact visitors.2.时态语态问题We may given it to the PE company.We may give it to the PE company..3. 主谓一致问题 The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners. The sport stadiums are very great and are highly spoken of by the foreigners.4. 逐字翻译问题The stadiums can open to people for do exercise use.The stadiums can be opened to people for doing exercises.5. 词性混淆问题It can creative money..It can create/bring in money.Many people can use them to strong our body.Many people can use them to strengthen our body.6. 介词短语的运用问题I am writing to make some advice for how to make full use of the sports stadium.I am writing to make some advice on how to make full use of the sports stadium.7.句子结构不完整Only make full use of them does it make sense .Only by making full use of them does it make sense The 29th Olympic Games which hosted in Beijing were held successfully.The 29th Olympic Games which were hosted in Beijing were held successfully.四、如何在提示类作文中拿到高分？1. 审题：题材、时态、结构、要求（词数）2. 列提纲/要点3.连词成句4.连句成篇5. 润色修正6. 定稿审题：题材（书信格式）人称（第一、三人称）时态(一般现在时)结构：开头、正文、结尾列提纲/要点①08年奥运会刚刚落幕.The 2008 Beijing Olympic/were over/finished/held successfully in Beijing②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.Collect some adviceHow to use/make use of /make the best of the stadiums.After the Olympic Games③你想写一些建议Want to write some advice/Would like to give