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作文 看图写话型 不要离题，读懂题目。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of saving food. 所以 （1）对图画进行描述 （2）结合图画，对论点the importance of saving food发表自己的看法 Step 1: Title [if required] 1. 实词【名、动、形、副词、数词等】首字母大写，虚词{介词、冠词}不需要 Step 2: the main body 第一段：对图画进行简要描述 （1）对图画的表面意义进行描述 As is vividly depicted in the cartoon (given above), a big tall man is throwing away leftovers which are quite a lot and seem delicious, while in the dustbin a skinny little man keeps his mouth wide open, eagerly waiting for something to eat. The picture implicitly raises the question of wasting food, which has been a major issue world wide. As is shown in this cartoon, In this picture, we can see that 模板： As is (vividly) depicted/shown/revealed in the cartoon/picture, there are sb doing… 或 sb. do….（这个更不容易出错） Notes： 【1】可引用图画中人物的对话。简要描述即可, 简洁，不罗嗦 Wrong samples: We can look at the picture, and it is clearly that… Look at the picture, we can observe something. A man is trowing… 2. 第一段末尾，指明图画的内涵, 即图画所反映的社会现象等。 The cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that quite a lot people undervalue the importance of saving food these days. 模板： The purpose of this picture is to show us that due (great enough) attention has to be paid to It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message that… 第二段： 对论点the importance of saving food 发表自己的看法 As far as I’m concerned, it is very important for us to 或者，分析导致这个问题的原因---表明自己的观点。 Notes: 表述几点观点用的模板： Firstly, Secondly, lastly, the last but not the least/ for one thing, for another, furthermore, more over, what’s more… （Wrong pattern: First..next.做事的顺序） 最后一段：总结观点，还可以提出建议、期望、号召等。 All in all, if we want to keep progressing, it is important to. In conclusion, it’s of much necessity for us to... From what I have stated above, the issue of food saving is very important, which give us much benefit in our life. There is no questio