雅思云课堂20140108大作文写作语法之二逻辑主语+代词(顾家北）.docxVIP

大作文写作语法之二：逻辑主语+代词雅思云课堂 0108顾家北逻辑主语逻辑主语是大家经常忽略的一个问题1、有了基因食品，食品饥荒可以更好的解决。CWith genetically modified crops, …..A the food shortage can tackle（及物动词一定要被动）. B the food shortage can to be tackled. C we can tackle the food shortage. D we can be tackle the food shortage.人答案：C解析：A. tackle及物动词，有被动，改 can be tackled；即使改成被动，with sth后面的逻辑主语最好是人。B. can+doD. be+do永远都是错的！！！2、通过提高实际经验，找工作会更加容易。DBy increasing practical experience, …A people are easy to find jobs. B it is easier for people to find jobs.C people are probable to find jobs. D people can find jobs easily.答案：D解析：A. 人不能用easy修饰 B. 没有语法错误，但D的语感更好C. 人不能说probable词伙自己可以记一下 practical experience3、为了减少肥胖，针对小孩的快餐广告要禁止。C….. in order to reduce obesity.A Advertisements targeting children should be banned逻辑主语的问题，in order to 为了，逻辑主语是人B Ban advertisements targeting children is important ban是动词不能做主语后面有is，不能够同时有两个动词C Governments should ban food advertisements （that are）targeting children Targeting不能写成targeted，因为是主动的D Advertisers should not target children意思不对4、政府需要加大惩罚, 去避免事故的重复发生。D….. so as to prevent a repeat of accidents. A punishment should be imposed 主语不对，So as to= in order to主语要是【人】才可以prevent accidentsB punishment should imposeimpose要被动；即使被动，也还有主语的问题C it is necessary to impose punishment 缺少主语==》it is necessary for governmentto impose punishmentD Governments should impose severe punishment Reduce是及物动词，不能用于图表作文5、人们喜欢扔垃圾，破坏环境。B、DPeople drop litter…. the damage to the environment. A and cause 人不能cause damageB , thereby causing C, which cause 主谓一致 causesD and this problem can cause分词结构90%是修饰人答案：B、D解析：A. 并列句，人是主语，不能cause C. which cause，主谓不一致应为which causes D. this problem代指drop litter大部分情况下，分词结构修饰前面的人，有时候也会修饰前面的事情6、如果人们拆毁老建筑，我们的城市景观就会被改变很厉害。CIf people demolish old buildings, ….. ….A our cityscape will be changed. our和people不能同时说，会混淆，不知道是说我们还是说人B we will change the cityscape. we 和peopleC the cityscape will be changed. D people’s cityscape will be changed. 一个句子出现一个代词people之后就不要再出现people了，改成their也不对，语感不对7、不会说英文的移民需要学会这个语言，这种知识