夹叙夹议类作文课件.pptVIP

One day, ______________.1 ____________. ___________. ___________.2 In my opinion, we should_____________. [克隆须知] 夹叙夹议类作文所记的故事一般都包含有一定的教育意义，所以在写作时一般先写某个故事或现象，然后根据这个故事或现象所说明的问题发表看法、感想或评论。谈自己的感想、看法时，可以用一两句话，也可以用一小段话，可长可短。如果有一定故事情节，常以记事为主；如果只是说明某一现象，也可以以议论为主。 * * * * Step1. 作文模板 交代故事发生的时间、地点等. 介绍故事发展常用的句式. 发表议论或看法 . Step2. 真题例析 假设你是图1中的男孩，请根据以下图画提供的情节线索，以 “Sharing Housework”为题，用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。 注意：1.书面表达必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整。 2.词数：100左右。 ? 审题立意 审题第一步：确定文体。这是一篇夹叙夹议的作文。 审题第二步：确定写作目的。让大家懂得父母为我们 付出之不易。 审题第三步：确定写作内容。我要出去踢球，看见妈妈要洗衣服；觉得妈妈太累了，决定要帮妈妈洗衣服；小朋友叫我去踢球，我没去；我觉得洗衣服很累人；我把衣服洗完了，妈妈也回来了；我很高兴；我的感想：我们的父母工作很辛苦，我们应该经常帮他们。 撰写提纲 第一步：确定文章布局。这是一篇夹叙夹议的作文，先按一般记叙类作文的方式交代故事的起因、经过、结果‘再写自己的感想或看法。 第二步：列要点：go out with my football（要去踢球）；do some washing, decide to help mum（妈妈要洗衣服，我决定帮忙）； invite me to play football, refuse（朋友来请我踢球，我拒绝了）； hard work for me, mum gets back and praises me, feel proud（妈妈回来表扬了我，我很高兴）；do something in return（谈我的感 想）。 低档作文（第四档，8分） Sharing Housework In the pictures, you can see that a boy is going out with a football. He is going to play with his friends, but his mother is busy washing clothes. When he finds that his mother is busy, he decides to help his mother. So he begins to wash clothes when his mother is away. After some time, one of his friends comes to ask him to play football. But he refuses, he finds it very hard to wash clothes. Finally, he finishes washing all the clothes and hangs them on a line. When his mother comes back, he is praised by his mother. He feels very happy. From this story, we learn that our parents do everything for us; they are very busy. Sometimes, we can do something to help them a little. 高分作文 （第一档，15分） Last Saturday morning, I saw my mother was getting ready to wash some clothes when 1 I was about to go out with my football. I thought, “ How hard mum is working! She must be very tired.” So I decided to give up my plan and to help mum with the washing. I began to wash the clothes when my mum w