书面表达七字作文法.ppt

写作的定义： What is writing? Writing4.连：连词成句，连句成篇 6、改——查错改错 1.避免重复 In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible. The desk is round in shape and red in color. 2.句子结构简洁 Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting? Look out for cars while you are crossing the street? 练习改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 1. Do you know the girl who is dressed in red? Do you know the girl _____________. 2. We finally reached home at 10 pm, and we were tired and hungry. We finally reached home at 10 pm, ________________. 连贯性 4. 练习使用词组来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 1). She likes sports very much. She shows great interest in sports. She is very fond of sports. She is crazy about sports. She goes in for sports. Writing My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. ①She is very fashionable.②She loves her students. She cares about us. ③Her lessons are interesting and lively; ④ Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching ! Rewriting : 5. 美 6.改 7.抄 Beginning Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. ①She is very fashionable.②She loves her students. She cares about us. Miss Sun，our English teacher, is 25 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. ①She is very fashionable.②Since she loves us and cares about our needs, she is very helpful in our school life. ③Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; ④ Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. Main body ③Her lessons are interesting and lively; ④ Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. Ending We all love her and her teaching ! In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching! * * 英语写作复习课 Writing is to express your thought